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PostSubject: Glacial Mist Application   Fri Sep 13, 2013 1:55 am

Full (furcadia) Name: Glacial Mist

Alias/Nickname: Mist

Name of alts we may know you as:None really. My other toons I do use how ever are Umar Oren, Blood Moon Eternal, and Genbutsu.

Why do you want this character?: Because I like Pegasus's and I needed to make a new character to fit the rp story here.

How often are you online?: Depends on work, but I can be on pretty much any time of the day.

Gender:  Male

Species: Pegasus

Age: 18

Cutie Mark:A light blue cloud with ice particles trailing behind it

Generation: Gen 4

Special Somepony: Nopony yet

Pet: Not really a pet, but has a tiny humming bird that follows him every where called Zippy

Residence: Currently traveling just left cloudsdale to see the world down below.

Workplace:None

Occupation:None

Short Introduction: Hey, Glacial Mist here...I just like to say how every pony doing? Oh and I guess I should introduce myself a little bit...mmm let's see...Meh can't really think of a intro that would sound good so just read below for my info, alright? ;o

Backstory: He spent most of his life in Cloudsdale not once leaving to venture beyond the safety of the clouds. Mist how ever one day gets dared to go on a long journey to below the clouds and see the world below. Mist being prideful takes the challenge and ventures below leaving Cloudsdale behind him and into the world below the clouds as he wondered what awaited him there.

Appearance:Glacial mist is a icy blue furred pegasus with a white mane and a white along the tops of his wings. His appearance alters slightly while flying where blue ice like mist comes from his wings the mist can surround his entire body if he flying as top speed.

Personality:His personality is kind, but he often talks big and is very prideful so usually it gets him into trouble.

Job: None.

Equestria RP Alts: Not yet

Ref Image:Don't have one that would match my description...x.x I used pony creator to make a semi image of him the only thing wrong is his cutie mark I could find an exact one for him so I went with ice by it self.

Sample Post:Glacial Mist arrived below the clouds and came in for a landing near a pond; how ever he built up too much speed in his descent and was barely able to pull up as his hooves buried into the grounds to try and stop him. Mist managed to finally slow his self down, but not before his front half flipped over driving him face first into a mud pool. Mist sat up and shaked his head as the mud flew off his face, but he let out a sigh when he heard the frantically sound of wings flapping and he looked up to the sky and saw Zippy his little humming bird companion who seems to not want to leave Mist's side, "Not a word..." Mist told Zippy. Mist turned around and walked towards the pool as he sat down beside it and leaned forward slightly and then diped his head in the pool, before pulling back and shaking his mane to get the water off of him leaving him as if he did not face plant just moments ago into the mud. Mist got back up and looked around, before sighing once more and with trembling legs started to walk off towards what he thought was a town off in the distance as he told his self, "Come on...you made it this far no need to back down now." Mist took a deep breath followed by a gulp then continued to walk towards the town with a renewed confidence as his companion Zippy followed closely behind him.


Last edited by Glacial Mist on Sat Sep 14, 2013 1:40 am; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Changed a few things to include a pull and a solo sample post.)
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PostSubject: Re: Glacial Mist Application   Fri Sep 13, 2013 11:28 pm

Good for the most part. Two things, though. First, you forgot to include a poll! Razz Please edit your post and add a poll, with Approve, Decline, and Undecided as the options. Second, your role play example: While the writing itself is sound, I prefer that players demonstrate that they understand they will only be controlling their own character during role play. That is, I'd like you to retouch your role play example so it would work as an actual role play post, rather than just a little story.

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